The door opens onto a construction scene as the sun is setting. "This is Navy Pier," says Ray. "The Robert Mackenzie was supposed to come in here back when it was still a serious commercial facility. We're kind of assuming that's where it's trying to come back to."
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Date: 2007-09-05 02:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-05 02:31 am (UTC)"That's cause you've never worked with me. Or, you know, a Council-level wizard. You don't get to be a part of the club for collecting bottle caps, you know what I mean?"
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Date: 2007-09-05 02:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-09-05 02:44 am (UTC)Blink blink blink.
"After the beer, man. After the beer."
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Date: 2007-09-05 02:48 am (UTC)The darkness is drawing in close by the time they reach the pier again. "THERE you are," says Venkman. "We were beginning to wonder if you got eaten or something."
"No, no, we're fine," Ray assures the other Ghostbusters, and the slightly suspicious-looking Coast Guard types. "Just settling a few matters that were feeding into the Mackenzie's situation. Does everybody wanna introduce themselves?"
He figures, as Peter and Egon and Winston lean over to make introductions, that it's probably safest that way.
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Date: 2007-09-05 02:50 am (UTC)"I go by Ramirez," he says to all and sundry. "Hi."
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Date: 2007-09-05 03:02 am (UTC)He doesn't sound as if he's wrong.
"Whether or not it manifests, we were hoping to put the spirits of the Mackenzie's crew to rest once and for all," he continues. "If you have any advice on the matter, we'd be glad to hear it."
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Date: 2007-09-05 03:15 am (UTC)"Personally? I've never done an exorcism that big."
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Date: 2007-09-05 03:25 am (UTC)"In fact, the only one of us here who's even come close to that kind of exorcism is standing right next to you," says Peter, nodding meaningfully at Ray. "In Paris, remember?"
"That hardly counts, Peter. A, we had the Eiffel Tower to work with, and B, the mechanics involved were mostly Egon's idea."
"Still. It's not like we've got Yuna here."
"Don't I know it," Ray says wearily. Then he turns to Ramirez. "Sorry. There's a young lady in the Bar whose particular specialty is the sending of bound or reluctant dead into the afterlife. She was there to help out last October when the Baron showed up- anyway, ignore the stuff about Paris. The situation's completely different here. As far as I can tell, this is a simple Chinese ghost dance writ extremely large. I honestly think that if we can work out a way to dispel the majority of the manifesting storm's strength, the Mackenzie should be able to break out of its loop and finish what it started all those years ago. Like it says in the song, if I don't come home tonight, I will make it home someday."
Winston's not commenting just yet. He's holding out one hand and looking up to the sky. "Rain's coming," he murmurs.
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Date: 2007-09-05 03:32 am (UTC)"I can feel it."
He feels the energy of the storm. The--
The energy of the storm. If he can loop the energy of the storm to stop the storm.
"And I think I can do it. If, uh, you guys don't mind."
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Date: 2007-09-05 03:37 am (UTC)Ray is talking intently with one of the higher-ranking Coast Guard officers on the scene, a stout woman with iron-grey hair and blue eyes. It's a rare occasion when that kind of conversation from him doesn't leave the other person's eyes glazed over, but apparently the Coast Guard's people are made of sterner stuff than most.
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Date: 2007-09-05 03:51 am (UTC)"Uh, either I can pull this off or I can't. That's about it."
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Date: 2007-09-05 04:20 am (UTC)Twenty-eight thousand tons of coal on a cold November day )
"Okay, no problem," says Peter. "Spengs, there anything you think we need to be doing?"
( Eight hundred feet and ten more long, eighty feet across
Navy Pier Chicago, our destination through the frost )
"The best we can do right now is monitor, Peter," says Egon. "Ray?"
( At two AM on the second waves were runnin' up to forty feet
Winds were blowing sixty miles, our engines crankin' heat )
"Huh?" says Ray, looking over his shoulder. "Oh- sorry, Egon. Captain, are we set?"
( At 3:13 we took a wave, our wheelhouse left behind )
"I could use another radio operator, frankly," says the grey-haired woman. "We're a little short in that department right now."
( The radar slipped beneath the waves and we were runnin' blind )
"That'll be me," says Winston, stepping forward. "I wasn't a signal man in the Army, but I know my stuff all right."
( Hear me call across the waves
If I don't come home tonight )
As the Coast Guard captain leads Winston over to the nearest still-functioning radio she's got on hand, the skies begin to rumble.
( I will make it home some day )
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Date: 2007-09-05 04:50 am (UTC)Please don't let me die a virgin.
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Date: 2007-09-05 05:19 am (UTC)There's a peculiar quality to the storm, difficult to put one's finger on. It has the feel of something that ought to have been more dangerous- a thin, threadbare sort of feeling, for all its sudden onset and terrible size. Some vital component that should have been there, isn't.
( Thirty-two down on the Robert Mackenzie)
Further up the pier, on both sides, uniformed men and women are hunching over their radios and listening intently even as the winds begin to surge.
( Steel boats and iron men)
Outside of Carlos' range, three of the Ghostbusters are clustered around the fourth. Winston apparently knows more than he let on; he's working the Coast Guard radio as if he were born to it.
( Thirty-two down on the Robert Mackenzie)
"Come on," Winston mutters, fingers moving deftly over the radio controls as the others exchange worried glances or peer out over the growing waves on the lake. "Come on, I know you guys are out there, I know you can hear me- Mackenzie? Captain Phillips, of the Robert Mackenzie? Can you hear me?"
( Steel boats and iron men)
And as the storm, threadbare though it might be, gathers itself to break... out on the waters, there is a ship in the darkness where there hadn't been one before.
( Thirty-two down on the Robert Mackenzie)
"-mayday, mayday- I repeat, this is the Roberth Mackenzie-"
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Date: 2007-09-06 12:19 am (UTC)There were perks to being an apprentice to a venerable old wizard, after all. The library was one of them.
Then he opens his eyes, looks out to the storm and puts out his staff, sticking it in front of him on the ground. It stands there, as if jammed into the ground.
That's when he starts in on the Nahautl, the true magic, his bread and butter. Words, built in chains as the language required, making connections and rearranging energies, his hands moving as well. He was going to attack this from two ends: use the energy from the storm to settle the storm.
If he could pull it off. Either way, it's going to hurt.
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Date: 2007-09-06 12:41 am (UTC)"Wish I did, Zeddmore, but we lost our radar and our other navigation's shot to hell."
"Figures," says Winston dryly, looking up to the Coast Guard representative. "You got anything for me?"
"Soon as we can get our chopper down through those clouds, he'll be able to pinpoint the ship," the captain says. "How are you getting the radio to do that? Nobody else is even picking the distress call up!"
Winston silently points at the PKE meter that Egon loaned him; he's rigged several of the radio's wires to interface with the signal arms of the meter.
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Date: 2007-09-06 12:55 am (UTC)Then he reaches out a hand and grabs the staff, banging it two times on the ground, then a third, before raising it to the sky.
"Ilhuicaxitiatletleco!"
And that... that was either going to do it or--
Holy shit this is gonna hurt--
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:08 am (UTC)Then the lightning strikes, knifing its way downward towards Ramirez' staff with unstoppable force. When the blue-white levin light clears and people can see again, the winds've picked up once more- but they're spinning upwards, scouring into the clouds and pushing them apart in every conceivable direction.
"What the hell was that?"
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:10 am (UTC)The energy courses through him, burning so good he's laughing, grinning wild and mad and it hurts, dios mio but it hurts and every cell in his body feels like it's going to explode from the strain of it but he adjusts it, reaches back and grabs the sword and grounds himself between the two impliments as the winds begin to tear at the storm, tear the clouds apart, breaking up the low pressure systems and all.
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:26 am (UTC)"Already on it, Mr. Zeddmore," says the Coast Guard captain with a grin. She points a little further up the pier to where a slew of midshipmen and lesser officers are preparing the dock for the ship's arrival.
Winston grins, looking up at the sky; the sound of helicopter blades can be heard. "Mr. Phillips," he says into the microphone, "here's what I'm gonna need you to do..."
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:36 am (UTC)...he's cool.
...and he's good.
But he's not that good.
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Date: 2007-09-06 01:50 am (UTC)( hear me call across the waves: )
Most everybody- eventually Venkman and one of the junior Coasties, who's considerably younger and more attractive than her captain, spot Carlos and move to haul him out of the way to somewhere more comfortable.
( if I don't come home tonight, )
The storm is rapidly blowing itself out as the ship eases its way around the deadly six-fathom shoal and sets a course straight for the pier.
( I will make it home someday... )
It's fairly glowing as it slows itself down for the final approach.
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